Friday, March 17, 2006

Gravity equals tragedy...

A golden fry falls
to earth like Icarus it was
salty, like my tears

7 Comments:

At 8:43 AM, Blogger BeckoningChasm said...

You know, the remake is just as good as the original--I don't care what the critics say.

 
At 9:18 AM, Anonymous KurtVon said...

a frozen moment
for the page gives no response
press submit again

 
At 10:31 AM, Blogger Jessica R. said...

You obviously haven't heard of the five second rule then.

 
At 11:14 AM, Blogger Ken Begg said...

The annoying thing is that now I have to leave both posts up.

 
At 11:22 AM, Blogger Big Al said...

"second verse, same as the first"

 
At 2:26 PM, Blogger Brad said...

The fearless Ken Begg.
Trouble with the computer?
Post it all again.

 
At 8:49 AM, Anonymous KurtVon said...

I know this topic is well over, but I couldn't resist translating the original haiku into Japanese. My haiku always made the instructor cry (usually he cried "why me?"):

Furenchi Furai,
yuka ni furu
namida aji

The french fry
falls like rain to the ground,
tear flavored.

 

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